读后续写 拿下！
自我介绍：英语多次140+，读后续写22-24分
目录（1）总论（2）实操（3）基本原则与注意（4）遣词造句小技巧
总论：读后续写是给出约350 words 的故事类记叙文和两个段首提示，考生要根据段首提示续写两段。考察的是学生用正能量及合理情节解决问题能力和语言运用描写能力。
底层逻辑：读后续写本质上是解决前文与所给开头两段提示所留下的问题，将一篇文章完善。既然是同一篇文章，那么前后部分应保持人物性格、语言风格、主旨的一致。所以，读后续写高分的底层逻辑是用符合前文的人物、语言、主旨来解决前文提出的问题，宣扬正能量。下面我将为大家展示写出一篇高分读后续写的流程。
题目
Kent was a manager of a furniture agency. His establishment nearly went bankrupt (倒 闭) because of the wrong decision he had made. He was so regretful and depressed that he planned to drive to a bar alone to release his emotions.
It was nearly midnight in an extremely cold winter, and the temperature was minus 9. There were few people in the street. Suddenly, a figure of an old madam entered his line of vision. She was standing sideways near a platform, dressed in a plain coat, dragging a suitcase in one hand, and holding a plastic bag in the other hand. The slight old lady was seemingly more than 80. She was trembling in the cutting wind. Now she kept motioning Kent for a ride. Although Kent was somewhat angry about the old madam’s disturbing, he wouldn’t like to leave her in the cold wind. He noticed she coughed violently and thought that she might be ill and really needed help. So he braked near her.
The madam said, "Would you please take me for a ride? I can offer double fare..." Kent interrupted her, "I will charge you nothing! Come on!" The madam pointed to her luggage and said, "Could you put my suitcase into the car?" Kent stepped out and put it in the trunk.
Kent proceeded to drive. He stopped at a petrol station where he wanted to purchase gallons of gasoline(汽油). During the interval when they waited in a queue, the madam began her narration, "Could you please send me to the charity house in the suburbs? I want to send the people there something. I was given help there 50 years ago. The president and workers were all good guys." She burst into tears, "Now they’ve all passed away. The life was tough at that time, but we all loved and cared about each other. I’ve held a desire to be back there again for long." Kent realized the madam was recalling a section of the good missing days. A complicated feeling surrounded him, and he he wouldn’t like to leave her in the cold wind.
After a two-hour drive, they came to the gate of their destination….
Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the nursing home was for patients with incurable diseases….
实操
第一步：读原文，分析人物关系，性格，能力，找出待解决问题（负面的、不明确的细节）
第二步：根据信息设计情节解决问题
Kent：问题--went bankrupt for wrong decision / regretful and depressed /a bar to release his emotions（续写部分应该展现出他的情况变好）
品质-- he wouldn’t like to leave her in the cold wind， he wouldn’t like to leave her in the cold wind，从这些部分可以看出他是个kind man（推测主题是好人有好报）
The old lady :问题--charity house / send the something（具体是什么东西）
nursing home（跟old lady有什么关系，为什么要去这个地方）
情况--she coughed violently and thought that she might be ill and really needed help结合 the nursing home was for patients with incurable diseases推测出old lady生了重病住
在nursing home
品质--在生病的情况下还要去送东西，是个懂得感恩的人
由此推测，old lady的行为和话语对Kent产生影响，让他的情况变好，由此来展现主题。
情节问题
After a two-hour drive, they came to the gate of their destination….要续写的部分应该是到达destination之后看到什么、做了什么、感受到什么，具体内容我们要从上文找线索。
上文old lady提到 I want to send the people there something. 具体是什么东西呢？上文提到 the temperature was minus 9.说明天气很冷，推测可能送的是一些保暖的东西
上文The life was tough at that time, but we all loved and cared about each other. I’ve held a desire to be back there again for long.根据这个我们可以推测old lady回去后想起了她以前的日子
（3)根据下文的Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence., because he knew the nursing home was for patients with incurable diseases….
我们需要在这一段点出this的具体内容，使上下文连接更加顺畅,还要点出old lady 使Kent情况变好的过程（解决问题）
构思完成，看看整段写法
After a two-hour drive, they came to the gate of their destination. At the sight of the familiar house, cheerful and thrilled, the madam grinned from ear to ear, eyes twinkling with relief. The days spent with her friends flashed across her mind in a split second（照应上文在nursing house待过一段时间). Seeing her stagger in the biting wind, Kent stepped forward to support her, feeling her whole body shivering.（照应ill、cold winter） Pulling out a variety of necessities for warmth from the suitcase（照应send something、cold）, the madam then cautiously reached into her pocket, took out a bank card and handed it to the president, saying nearly all her savings were in it. Kent felt something different in his heart! （Kent的转变)He didn’t recover from shock until he heard the madam’s voice, “Would you please take the trouble to send me back to the nursing home where I live?” （this的内容）
Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the nursing home was for patients with incurable diseases….要续写的部分应该是点明old lady到这个地方的原因，她的言行对Kent的影响和最后Kent变好（问题解决）
上文提到 Kent lapsed into silence，所以续写部分最好是有什么来打破silence，打破silence的最好方式就是有声音，那就用old lady的话
Old lady的言行如何对Kent产生影响呢？
这里给大家推荐一种写法，用鲜明的对比引入思考：the old lady年老病重却感恩，积极乐观---- Kent 年轻健康却意志消沉，冷暖 黑白 虚弱健康 的对比，形成强烈冲击，引起Kent的思考，自然流畅
构思完成，看看整段写法
Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the nursing home was for patients with incurable diseases. “ Now, I have no pity !” she said（打破silence）, with a broad smile spreading over her pale face（照应前文身体不好）. The simple words, found their way straight into Kent’s heart. (过渡) A mixture of sympathy and warmth flooded over Kent, especially when he glanced at the madam’s weather-beaten face and the joyful light in her eyes. Despite her own misfortune, she still possessed a grateful and optimistic heart！（强烈反差，引出主题） After bidding farewell, gazing at her weak figure, Kent felt the ice in his heart melt on this cold winter dawn.（比上一段的something different更进一步） He knew he would carry hope and love forward! On his way back, the first ray of light shed on his face! It was another day！（从黑夜到白天，暗示Kent心境的变化，解决问题）
基本原则及要注意的部分，大家看着上面我给的范文再看这部分的感受会更直观
基本原则
原文一致 （避免突兀荒唐） 情节连贯衔接，时态, 人物, 时间, 语言 风格
曲折性 （保证可读性） 情节有一定曲折性，但不要过于复杂，一波未平，一波又起不可取；更要注重细节描写， 要生动。
正能量 （价值观要正） 真善美
注意
不增加主要人物、不增加旁支情节、不用过多对话、不违背逻辑常理、不偏离原文主、 不用负能量结局、不在文末设置悬念
例子:上文Kent的问题其实有两个--公司倒闭和心情不好，为什么我没有解决公司倒闭的问题呢？因为现实中这种问题不是一朝一夕能够解决的，如果这样写就脱离现实了，所以我只解决了他的心情问题
遣词造句小技巧
大家可能缺乏将文章写生动的好方法，下面我提供一些遣词造句小技巧
巧妙利用文章信息丰富内容
“ Now, I have no pity !” she said, with a broad smile spreading over her pale face.这里添加了broad和pale两个词既展现出old lady生病的状态又照应上文
主语尽量不要是自己
The simple words, found their way straight into Kent’s heart. 这句话与Kent was touched表达的是同个意思，但前者会让你感觉到words是具有生命力的，显得十分生动
转变要有过程
续写第一段用Kent felt something different in his heart! 第二段用The simple words, found their way straight into Kent’s heart.你可以看出Kent心境的变化的有递进顺序的，这样写更符合实际情况
善于虚写
On his way back, the first ray of light shed on his face! 用阳光来暗示Kent心情的变化，非常高级
I realized that the true secret isn’t what secret my mother planted in the park but what she planted in my heart.由实到虚
用细节描写代替对话
Mrs. Rossi said, “OK, I promise you!”这句话不够生动，修改为Hesitant as she was, Mrs. Rossi, plucking up her courage, nodded her head, patting Aram with approval.
运用一些传神的词语
Hundreds of people were attracted by the wonderful smell, lining up to buy.这句话本身已经很不错了，我们稍微地修改两个词会变得更好Hundreds of people were arrested by the inviting smell, lining up to buy.你被美味俘获了，完美！
5、看到这里你会不会觉得读后虚写其实非常简单，但还是需要我们多加练习。祝大家的读后续写都能取得高分！
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